My favorite piece of writing

This term I did a very good piece of writing that was amazing it is about a boy in candyland here it is

Candyland catastrophe…

Candy pigs and chickens to animals made out of candy,12 year old Sam lived in a magical place called Candyland,he lived with his mum and dad.It was a sunday and Sam went to feed the pigs.

“Why do I have to feed the pigs grr I hate pigs,”mumbled Sam while he walked to the pig cage.

Sam walked into the pig cage all the pigs snuggled him till he fell over.

“Get of you dumb pigs”yelled Sam

The pigs went off him and stood back away from Sam.

“Mum I’m going for a walk in the raro desert to get away from the stupid pigs,”said Sam to his mother.

“Ok Sam be careful”said Sam's’ mother.

It was a mile walk to the raro desert Sam packed food and a drink for the way.

“Gosh why is it my job to feed those stupid pigs they have no purpose to like me”mumbled Sam.

The glazing sun made Sam fall over it was so hot his water had run dry and his food caught on fire.

“It was those stupid pigs that made me go out here” yelled Sam with anger.

“Stupid rock”said Sam after he kicked the rock.

The ground was shaking and rumbling  like an earthquake the raro was going down into a hole with Some in it.

“Help me someone Help!,”screamed Sam.

“Hello wake up are you dead”said the Genie of sugar

“I’m awake who are you?”said Sam.

“I am the Genie of something and you get three wishes”said the genie.

“Give them to me now”said Sam.

“Fine you only get one because you made me mad”said the genie.

“I wish of pigs to hate me”said Sam.

Zap the wish worked pigs really hate him and Sam climbed out of the tomb and there were thousands of pigs with tommyknockers and one even had a bag to put his dead body in.

“Help me!”yelled Sam

The general pig was the fastest and was on Sams trail.

“oink (get that boy)”said general pig

Sam was chased all around candyland on mentos mountain over the chocolate stream and fat people bar.

“Help!”cried Sam while he was running over the donut tower.

Sam is running out of puff fast he has traveled the whole world (He is very fit).

“I need to undo the wish”said Sam

Sam went to raro desert down the tomb and asked for the genie for one more wish he said…

“Do the chicken dance”said the genie

“Really ok”said Sam

Sam does the chicken dance just in time because the pigs arrived .

“Ok ok I wish for pigs to like me again”Yelled Sam

Pow the wish worked all the pigs dropped the weapons and snuggled him and everything was back the way it was except Sam as afraid of pigs.

THE END...